day tripper

Oh my...there's something ironic, I'm reviewing and I put knew instead of new. Haha, sorry!

Thank you both a lot! :D I know it wasn't much of an attention grabber, but I didn't want to post more and have way too much for just a ...

Thank you for the corrections :D I'm working on the next chapter of this right now, actually. (While also tryig to read a new book I got today d: )

Thank you very much, Silversun(: I'll get on those right away. Is there anything you'd like me to look at? Just PM with the link if so.

Thank you, thank you, thank you! I'll get working on those corrections as soon as possible.

Thank you! This actually isn't going to turn into story, it's just this one post. I am writing another novel though (I need to stop writing novels, I have like ...

Thank you, Angel. (: That's refreshing, I thought I'd get yelled at for this. Haha

Molto Grazie, bella!

I really liked the part where you say that Nichole wishes that her mum would come back to her and do all those things she used. That was the part ...

Haha(: Okay. And yay thank you! I really liked your idea.

I see why this is your "Baby". You really seemed to convey loads of meaning and thoughts into not very much space. Hahaha, same! :D That's where I got it. ...

Thank you so much, Lucy! Also, I just had something to say to one thing that you've both pointed out: Drinking driving does occur. Nichole can't drive, she only has ...

Thank you(: It's supposed to be short since it's an introduction. The chapters will become much longer; I promise!

Edited! Thank you, Ashley!

Oh! Oh! I got it! I got it! The reason Nemesis is uppercased is because the boy he wrestled is the guy in the ski mask three years later! Right? ...